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Outcome
Through Peer and group discussions I was able to understand and evaluate the different responses that other photographers had linked into my work. Through certain aspects such as clarity, flow and phrases suggested from my peers I had the ability to construct a better idea of how the viewer is interacting with the body of work. This work needs the voice of other people in order to justify what it wants to state from start till the end of its development.
What will happen next?
With this deep and interesting evaluation of my work I will bring into pure terms what I want to convey and how I will provide the viewer with a balance that will allow them to further engage the concept that I want to outline. Through various technical ideas I will experiment and underline different aspects that will mould the final concept development into one whole.
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